Well I have to say this is a rather good picture. The lighting and the dark atmosphere really sets the mood and you wonder who is about to attack I think the only real thing I have to comment on is your lineart/sketch. I think its distracting to me personally. If you cleaned it up some and maybe made the lines more natural but again that's my personal opinion but you wouldn't have asked for a critique if you didn't want to hear that haha. So if that was fixed I really think this would be an awesome picture, not that it already isn't
Znam ten ból xD Oczekiwanie na wtorek (jeśli dobrze pamiętam) i lot do kiosku po nowy komiks. Do dziś mamie nie mogę wybaczyć ,że oddała moją kolekcję od 1 egzemplarza do 100 ;< (było trochę nad, ale nie mam i nie pamiętam=
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